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All Comments on 'The Forbidden Door'

by ravenette

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I think that I've read worse.

I can't recall when though.

lordchilworthlordchilworthover 15 years ago
nice try

keep it up... it'll get easier and they'll get better... try to ignore the assinine spewing of the anally retententive close minded idiot arseholes who are non-constructive in their criticism... thank you

ReadyMikeReadyMikeover 15 years ago
First effort? Very nice

I can't believe this is your first effort! It is very sexy, nicely paced.

I'd be very happy to read more of your work.

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