All Comments on 'The Forest Ch. 01'

You've barely written anything, I know this is meant to be part one but all thats happened is he went for a run...

waste of time to read this

Too short. Needs more input

It is a good start but ended way too soon. I would love to see longer chapters with some meat on them. You seem to have a direction but we just didn't get enough in this chapter to hold on to.

Dam guys give a guy a break hes just getting started . let him get a couple of chapters in before you beat him up

Don't listen to assholes..good job got my interested

A really good start. A little short but I can already tell it's going to be a good story. I like character building and therefore creating a story instead just fucking and sucking by the second paragraph.

Don't let critics dissuade you from writing. I know you are laying the groundwork for a good story. Keep up the good work in writing. Looking forward to where the story is going!

Ease up on the "man and mate" usage it's a turnoff if they turn romantic. Hopefully the next chapter will be longer. Also let them get to know one another before the story turns sexual. Good luck, keep writing.

Can't wait to see where this goes

Less story, less buildup, just straight to the dirty. There's a shortage of good, fully fleshed out stories on here. So many think love or romance tags equal porn. They are two distinctly different things. I can't tell you how many times I've looked for another robcub, and ended up with no story.

Keep with it. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.