All Comments on 'The Forest Elf Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I just have to say....

Absolutely Awesome. I hope you add more and soon.

ImmortalRomanceImmortalRomanceover 15 years ago
WOW

That was really, really hot! I love your descriptions! I can't wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
leaving us in suspense

Great writing...please don't leave us to wait too much longer for the next installment!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
JUST PERFECT

SUPER SPECIAL AWAESOME! PLEASE CONTINUE!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
AWESOME

BEST STORY EVER WRITTEN!!!

lorno47lorno47about 15 years ago
More more!

Your descriptions are unreal, great job!

SunKisstSunKisstover 11 years ago

i wanna be that elf girl. i need that orc guy right now!

cittrancittranover 11 years ago
I'll make you my elf girl...

'Cuz I wanna be that orc.

;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Where’s the third part?

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I recall this story had more parts, it is a pity you removed them. It was hot when Yersia got a sister in the mountain elf, and the redheaded twin elfs were a treat when they serviced the other general.

Maybe you decided those bits didn't make the cut in terms of quality. This chapter seems charged too though I can't be sure, it has been a looong time since I first read this.

Still, hope one day this story continues in whichever direction ;)

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