All Comments on 'The Forest Nymph Ch. 01'

...but not by much. Your writing skills need a lot of help and quickly.

1. Use Spell Check. Use it often. Especially before you think about submiting a story to Literotica. There are at least thirty-five spelling and grammar mistakes in this story.

2. Please get an editor. He / She will help you with your prose. Heaven and hell knows you need help there, also. (Don't worry about this one. My editor takes me to task every time I send a story to her.)

3. Do not take criticism Personally. It is aimed at making you a better writer!

perpetuates its self. TK U MLJ LV NV

Great story, I love Greek mythology and erotic stories. Both were woven into this story magnificently. Keep up the great work!