All Comments on 'The Founding of a Sorority Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Linear Timeline

Sorry, but this is nearly impossible to read because of the constant flashbacks that have no transition before they occur. You've used the names Drew and Jenna in the past two chapters, but haven't even introduced them as characters in the story yet so they might as well be fleshlights at this point.

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