All Comments on 'The Four Hour Erection Ch. 01'

Great start. More please.

sound promising, definitely keep it up

Story has potential. A slow start but I am looking forward to seeing how creative you are with the tutoring!

Crap! My touchpad is acting screwy! Don't count my "vote" -- which unintentionally was cast as a "2". Unfortunately, I don't seem to have any way of editing my "vote," so I can't fix that, except to say that this tale is in contrast to the other works I've read on Literotica better than a 3, maybe better than a 4. Then again, I'm deducting points for grammar; the basic rating average of 4.48 is probably about right.