All Comments on 'The Foxiest Lady in Alameda County'

I don't normally like stories like this one, but this was really well written, for the most part. Public mound made me laugh, however. I know, it was a minor mistake that should have been caught by your very good editor, but still. :)

Really, it was a good story, and well-written.

Good sorty--need some growth n we awaite the next sentence

Keep writing