All Comments on 'The Fragile Abandoned Ch. 03'

So much was missed in fhis chapter - Andy's feelings of lust and guilt - the combined satisfaction the siblings shared at their long delayed merging - Natalie's relef at finally getting what she wanted so much. Only 3*.

The writer is in his early 20s, and I'm sure he was hard when he wrote this excellent story, maybe even shot a good healthy load at the end. I'm glad that Andy busted his little sister's cherry and finally unloaded his big brotherly balls up Natalie's cute little coochie. I hope the boy'll do it again and again, but I'm not going to read any of the other chapters. I'm afraid that Andy'll distance himself from his little sis, get involved with other (inferior) twats, worry about his declining career. I want to remember these two brilliantly portrayed figures as I last saw them, with Andy's big fat veiny prick soaking in his little sister's cute little cunt.

Without any warning, Andy thrust himself inside of me, ripping through my hymen, and filling me. It felt like he would split me in two and I yelped in pain.

My opinion of Andy just dropped significantly. He didn't give Natalie tender love. He basically raped her even though she consented. That was a heartless way to pop a girl's cherry. He used her to bust his nut twice then rolled over and went to sleep. What a total loser. 3/5

Not too thrilled with lead-up of a caring moral bug brother to an out and out sadistic rapist. To wit: “… he pinned my arms to where I could not move….”; “He slammed his cock in her breaking her hymen and continued relentlessly... Even a male virgin knows a females first time is slowly to ease the inevitable pain. Still gave you 4*, but not sure why. Maybe to ease the upcoming onslaught of critics sure to come