All Comments on 'The Fragile Abandoned Ch. 05'

by MarkBarnevski

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malizlatomalizlatoover 11 years ago

this Andy guy is really peace of shit...he doesn't deserve anything...I hope he ends up alone in some shitty cold cabin rest of his life...moron

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
andy

Andy is like most actors, so full of himself. He is like a child. Nat is a messed up

girl with money that can`t take care of herself. He needs to grow up before

he drives nat to kill or hurt herself. The parents are nuts also. Nat needs

help. waiting to see how you end this mess.

ChasBChasBover 11 years ago

This was, in many ways, the best thing in this series, even without any actual sex. It really brought out the conflict in Andy's mind, as well as Natalie's psychic immaturity. Can she quickly grow up, so he can demonstrate his love for her without feeling like he's fucking a child? He has already overcome the social and legal no-nos.That seems to be the main thing working on the back of his mind and distancing him. I hope Jessica stays out of the sexual mix, and becomes the catalyst Natalie needs. to become an adult. Ch 06, please - and soon! It could be a toughie!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great story

Andy is going to be fucking them both soon! Little Natalie is a perfect little sex kitten, any man would want her! The question is will Andy get all his sisters in a harem?

A lot of brothers have sex with thier sisters, might be one in five.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Sad story

I've never seen a sex story like this one. Heck, I even started to tear up at some parts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Please hurry

For goodness sake Mark please get to work we all need to know what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good Story

This is a great story - I'm a guy and I'm hurting for Natalie, please don't let her crash and burn...

unicorn64unicorn64over 10 years ago

Andy is a jerk. There's no other way to put it, he is a total jerk. Now wonder he is going to fail as a movie star.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
pathetic

Hes truly an asshole. No sense in saying anything else

DarkkBrothaOneDarkkBrothaOnealmost 2 years ago

You are too good!!! Haven't read a really engrossing story like this in a long while! You officially have a fan!!!

ScottishTexanScottishTexanalmost 2 years ago

Well, that happened and now Jessica knows. Everything now hinges on just what she's going to do with the information. Will she destroy what remains of her family? Or will she become the glue that keeps them bound together? I'll give you a 4/5 for a proper cliffhanger, but the story itself still sucks. ๐Ÿ˜•

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