All Comments on 'The Franchise Ch. 02'

by DrSqueaky

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
WOW once again!

These are great stories. Please keep up the good work. i would love to see this story contine the following season or later when children enter the picture. The table has been set. Seve the food!

TheEndBeginsTheEndBeginsabout 12 years ago

I love these stories, but this one felt a bit rushed. That's the only remotely bad thing I can say about any of your "Jammers" stories. I'd love to see more. Maybe next time a trainer finds love? The equipment manager? An assistant coach?

DarkMatter23DarkMatter23over 7 years ago
This I like

A great story that I found myself hooked on. Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
MOAR!!!!!!!

Please, I love your stories - especially this and the Emporor jack ones. Please, continue them :)

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