All Comments on 'The Freedom of Slavery Ch. 09'

lezars story plz

I think that any of the others brothers stories would be nice. But I also think that they need more character exspansion and I am curious as hell how they are all dealing with the fact that the Ama they paid for is now mated to two of them and carrying the others mates! Complicated as hell.

lezar i think would be a good option

I will enjoy reading ALL the brothers' stories.

I would love to see all the brothers stories. As for being a straight female;(I myself am one) my answer to that would be to consider finding someone who writes in that genre to help or co-write his story with you. I know I myself will have to do that in the future. Love the story, keep it up.

gaelic

I would enjoy reading about al the brothers

I would love to read about all the brothers and their mates.

I love to find out more of the brothers. With thyre own stories!!!!

you asked for which one to start with :>

Including the gay ones;)

I would love to hear about each one of the brothers :D I think you are a great writer and would love to hear everything you have to share.

I would love to about all the brothers... including the gay brother. You can always seek help with his story. you are doing a wonderful job...

This story has gotten better and better! I think you should consider re-naming it though, because she's not a slave anymore. She's becoming quite the kick-ass kitty and I wonder how each of the brothers really feel about that. I read some of the negative comments in the beginning and I am so glad that you kept writing!

Please continue this story....maybe move on to Lezar or Helius, as they seem very interesting during Alza/Kali's story. Keep up the great job and I look forward to reading more of your stories!! :)