All Comments on 'The Freedom of Slavery Ch. 12'

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Hubbys_PrincessHubbys_Princessover 11 years ago
awwww

The cubs sound sooooo cute... I want cubs damnit lol

Please hurry with the next chapter love the story so far and im glad you continued it after the hater comments on the first chapters. Tho there are some similarities to STTS by DrWolf at the begging its very different, i personaly think you could make this better with more discriptions of the world there in ie, the plants the fruits they eat the fabrics etc. But please dont leave it here cant wait till nxt chapter.

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