All Comments on 'The French Connection Ch. 01'

Why wasn't this story all written like "dekho na ye firang kya bol raha hai...kuch samajh nahi aa raha"? But what this story will show is that a woman (or a man) think she/he can cheat just because her husband (wife) is away for a long time due to his/her work!!! The second question that arises is: Why did he need to learn english, if to fuck no words were needed? By his questions we saw that what he wanted was an easy and inexpensive woman to fuck...1*

So I hope you gain something from the writing experience, but the reading is pretty mundane. Lonely slut wife plot, especially with a Frenchman? Yawn.

A good start. Now I await your story to be atleast 4 parts. Is she going to seduce the frenchie or is the frenchie!!!! Food for thought. Your last story on car was excellent hence you have to live up to that now!!!!

....without too many grammatical issues (although I'm making allowance here, as I take it English is a second language for you). I found one image very interesting....in reference to beading sweat..."drops of tears pooled on his forehead". It is an image with extended meaning (perhaps that I assume, rather than being meant) that will stay with me for some time to come.

And I must say, your description of the main character was amazing! I love and am extremely strongly attracted to the dusky looks of Indian and Latina women. Gawd, she's hot! Is she you? If so, then oh, MY!

Indian women are total whores, at least in LW.