All Comments on 'The Freshman Ch. 01'

Very good story his nakedness and her dominant

I know some people will call me racist, however i must say im not into black women. I think it would be better if all stories left out skin tone and stuck to body shape so the reader can place their preferred race onto the characters. Other than that i really loved the story. Please write more.

Your writing is very well done and you certainly manage to get the different characters across splendidly. If only males getting spanked by females wasn't a total sexual turn-off for me, I would continue with this story. As it stands, I'm sure others will enjoy it a lot ;)

It's a good start really. Moving to next chapters.

Nice

Nice starter for 5. Next????