All Comments on 'The Freshman Ch. 10'

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Anonymousabout 14 years ago

Rambling and way too lengthy

Forget all of the technical disussion - this is not a techie manual.

Anonymousabout 14 years ago

not too technical

This story was not too technical for my tastes. Good job.

Zakfar over 5 years ago

Good.

Nice twist. I would only complain that you told in advance that she would not be expelled, which ruined the climax excitement of the short drama.

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I enjoy writing erotic fiction and creating digital art in Poser. My ongoing project consists of a series of interconnected erotic discipline novels that I have illustrated with Poser images. My complete collection of fiction and images can be found at EC's Erotic Art & Fi...

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