All Comments on 'The Fruits Of Her Labors'

What a wonderful story of seduction! I really appreciate your pacing, like a great lover, building slowly to an incredible moment. I found it delightful!

You are a very talented writer. This wonderful story of seduction pulled me in immediately. I hope you continue this and move the story forward to where, perhaps, the girls end up together. Well done. Thank you!

This was great, well written and super hot!

This is not a criticism, really just a question. I am not sure that I get Mylene's motivation in seducing Kim, a married straight girl. There wasn't any talk of wanting a relationship with her, just that she wanted her. Mylene already had a FWB, did she just want another? That sounds a little like a horndog guy and she didn't strike me that way. I'm probably over thinking this ;)

Great to see you back, and as always the story is excellent.

I hope there are more of your stories coming soon.

Thanks for blessing us with another story, Milene.

No one does it better than you.

Very nicely done, Milene. I enjoyed it a great deal. Your descriptions were clear and, if I may say, left me wonderfully flushed and squirmy. It was a fab, quick read. Thank you!

I was thrilled to see this recent story (after a too-long hiatus) from the lady I think is the best writer on Lit. Milene is a superb story-teller, a wonderful eroticist, a mistress of pacing and character, and an all-around hot writer. This story is better than some of the earlier ones (even though all the hall-marks were present then as now), and is, quite simply, superb. Thanks, Milene, for another one.

A real pleasure to see that you had posted a new story.

Well done, erotic, and excellent - as usual. You picked up right where you left off. I'm so glad to see you are back and so hope there is more to come. And Ditto to all the other comments which reflected my feelings so accurately.

I've just found your new story and, like your other fans, I'm just so delighted you're back - and as good as ever :)

While personally I would have loved Kim to put up more resistance and the seduction take a little longer (nothing 'cums' easy in life and the thrill of the chase is invariably as wonderful as the capitulation!!) it still works so very well just as you've written it :)

And as ever the characters you create and the images you paint are incredibly hot !!

Oh yes... and clearly THAT tongue continues to be as talented as ever :))

Please keep submitting stories. Love your work. Would love to see this story progress and Milene talk Kim into going down on her. Would like to have Milene get into Kim's head and see why she decided to let Milene have her way with her. (Maybe Kim has been in the closet or always curious) Thanks and look forward to your next work!

Oh that was so damn hot. I absolutely loved it! So delicious.

The best of your stories, IMO, are the ones about seduction. And of those, this one is the best, with Joanna a close second. But all of that seduction group are very good.

I agree with some of the other posters that by it's nature, stories of seduction should be a bit longer in terms of the time of the characters. Not in terms of sequels but perhaps in chapters. This story could have lasted, in their time, for weeks. And that would add to the suspense and excitement, and there should be false starts, and small victories and setbacks until finally, surrender occurs.

All your stories are exciting. I need to find one in which you're treated to a good eating/licking - tasting as with Padme

I have to agree with previous commenters and especially with the calls for a longer story. That was my only criticism. The seduction was too quick. Should have been dragged out more to add to the excitement of the story.

Yet again a brilliant and erotic story, if too short. Please provide further chapters for characters as they have so much potential.

So well done, character development, beauty, sensual. It is amazing. Thank you

A lovely story! Thank you for writing it!

This was nice, clean and sexy. Really good read