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Anonymousalmost 12 years agocrap
It, quite frankly, is too short. And the grammar is absolutely terrible. Good idea, but it had too many mistakes to be good.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agodialogue stilted
I didn't even notice the grammar issues. The dialogue is so stilted and terrible I couldn't finish it.
Nemo18almost 12 years agoconfused
what exactly did this have to do with nude day? On top of that this just read like a bad porn, like the others I couldn't even finish
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