by Robert_Furlong
Enjoyed this but seemed to end way too soon. Hope Chap 2 is on the way! It has lots of potential for a really hot story.
Def ended without the ending it appeared to build up to. Needs a final chapter. Great story with fantastic build up, but ending leaves us hanging not banging.
Thanks for the comments guys. This story recounts just the first few nights of Shane's stay with his uncle and cousin. If it proved popular (which it has!) I intended to continue the story with further adventures. Shane has clearly hit it off nicely with Jake and it will fun to see how their friendship continues to develop.