All Comments on 'The Furlong Gene'

by Robert_Furlong

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Terrific!

A great read. Hope there's a sequel!

CuriousPeteCuriousPeteover 8 years ago
Great Start

Enjoyed this but seemed to end way too soon. Hope Chap 2 is on the way! It has lots of potential for a really hot story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Disappointing ending.

Def ended without the ending it appeared to build up to. Needs a final chapter. Great story with fantastic build up, but ending leaves us hanging not banging.

Robert_FurlongRobert_Furlongover 8 years agoAuthor
Already writing part 2

Thanks for the comments guys. This story recounts just the first few nights of Shane's stay with his uncle and cousin. If it proved popular (which it has!) I intended to continue the story with further adventures. Shane has clearly hit it off nicely with Jake and it will fun to see how their friendship continues to develop.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Where is part II?

Good read man! Keep it going.

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