All Comments on 'The Gallery'

Enjoyed this story. It was hot. 5 Stars.

Enjoyed the story, and it was arousing.9F93

This was a well written and very erotic story, both my wife and I enjoyed it. Most people do not automatically associate art galleries with hot sex, so this was a unique. My wife is an artist and when one of her works is included in an exhibition she often helps out with the “meet and greet” and attends the opening night cocktail party.

I always make sure she is dressed attractively and she receives more than her fair share of attention from men. With my permission she has arranged dates with some of them for later erotic trysts. Somehow, a mutual interest in art seems to spark the passions. However, to date she has not had a passionate encounter right on the gallery grounds.

You did have one slight inconsistency in the story: As they left the gallery, walked down the path, and made a visual connection you state that she let her dress drop to the “floor”. However, that should probably be “path”, “grass” or “ground”. Other than that the piece was extremely well written.

We encourage you to keep writing!

A super hot awesome hotwife story. Loved it.

Great story, good buildup and erotic ending.

Loved the story. Must have been amazing

Erotic and passionate. Thank You. They are both lucky men.

I liked the premise of your story....the first of this ilk that I've come across. The story itself was well written as a story. As a writer though there are many typo's and in my opinion some of the sentences are overlong. Nevertheless I enjoyed reading it. Trust my comments help. A.