All Comments on 'The Game Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Truly great story

Great story among so much chaff. Well written, great description and a great plot (something slightly different although slightly predictable at times). Picked up a couple of minor grammar/spelling errors but can't really fault it though. Looking forward to part 2!!

jetoshjetoshover 7 years ago
Loved It!!

Finally a story involving characters my age! Really enjoyed the romp & looking forward to the next one!

liz33ndliz33ndover 7 years ago
a mature story for sure

great story and very well expressed, I loved it. mature and did not have to 'train' some younger partner.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
loved this

this type of thing, slow progression, as much about touching and caressing as it is about orgasm. Just a joy to read! Wish it had more chapters. 5*.

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