by clank46
Great story among so much chaff. Well written, great description and a great plot (something slightly different although slightly predictable at times). Picked up a couple of minor grammar/spelling errors but can't really fault it though. Looking forward to part 2!!
Finally a story involving characters my age! Really enjoyed the romp & looking forward to the next one!
great story and very well expressed, I loved it. mature and did not have to 'train' some younger partner.
this type of thing, slow progression, as much about touching and caressing as it is about orgasm. Just a joy to read! Wish it had more chapters. 5*.