All Comments on 'The Game'

Most of the time I don't bother to actually read the story. I just skim along.

This story hooked me right away, and I read every word.

You have talent. Keep going.

I assume ass-hole husband now realizes that game playing does nothing for a marriage. Hopefully, after he divorces his slut wife, he will try a different tack with next wife.

the Ct. Yankee

Please keep going.

That was Excellent.

One of the best seduction and "the best pussy eating" story, I ever read. By Golly.

Great idea!! I really liked the premise of the wife fighting against her climax.Could we have more of Gary reducing other wives to uncontrolled quivering wrecks, especially wives that had little or no sex outside their marriage and had not realise they had never had a full blown orgasm before.

More like this!

Your not still married so I guess being a wimp and sitting around waiting for the little slut to get done didn't work for her either. AT least you didn't tell us this made your marriage better just that you felt a lot of pain, now thats just what I want in a marriage. I read this same story before, I guess being a cockold made a impression on you.

with your concept of marriage... you'll be fucking your palm for the rest of your life. ompballs... why don't you spend some time on fixing your own life, then maybe you'll be able to write something beyoind this crap?

I have to agree with Anonymous in the UK. I thought the story was tremendous. I'd also like to see Gary do the same thing to other wives. Three ideas that I think would be particularly hot are; 1) a wife who thinks her control over her own orgasm is too great to be made to orgasm against her will, 2) a wife who has never been able to orgasm throug oral--says that while she likes it, it just doesn't get her over the edge and 3) Gary takes on a group of women--say 6 or more and has a certain amount of time to get all of them to cum.

This story was suggested to me by a reader of mine. I'm so glad they did. You had me absolutely intrigued from the get go. You showed me each of those characters so vividly I was there with them at every sexy, uncomfortable, awkward, hot moment. Very clever story. You've both flustered me and made me think. I love that.

Even though the sex and dialogue in this story might be perceived as hot, I think this marriage would not survive the event described in the story. The husband is always going to feel inadequate and will probably find somebody else. He'll lose his desire for his wife, as he won't be able to do as well in the sack as what she experienced that night, so he'll start avoiding sex unless he's a bit blitzed and doesn't care. He's going to perceive that his wife manipulated him into saying OK and resent what she did.

If my wife put me in this situation, I'd tell her that she could do whatever she wanted to, but would tell her not to bother to come home.

If the couple were just dating, I think the story might be OK, but you can bet I'd start looking for somebody else.

He just proven fact that every real man can do better than a natural born cuckold!

Start over and never see these people again.

...you seem to be just another meek wimp trying to write a story...Sorry I read it..

but inherited stupidity may be contagious, TK U MLJ LV NV

A mindless cunt. As bad as the other.

I think you lost your balls.

Maybe Gary will let Julie give her husband a mercy fuck every couple of weeks. Like Julie said, "He's not a fighter."

nuff said

Doesn't Julia's husband get a say in this? It's one (stupid) thing to let her fuck this guy once for the experience, it's something else again to even risk her being his sex toy for the night. I would hazard a guess that it will end up not being one night, either!

"It also made me incredibly hard." - Never a good thing. I realize that it's a physiological reaction to watching two people having sex, but knowing that one is your WIFE should shut it down!

but the resolution was never written. The real story is what happens after Julia is done? Otherwise, it is just cuck shit..

But I really would have refused the terms of the b et and told her that if she wanted to accept the terms of the bet that would be the end of our marriage. I have to admit wanting a threesome is a step in this direction.

Losing her when she asked Gary how he would do her

MINUS 5* if possible!!!

Slap on the cock cage and get pegged.

You know, my life was much better before reading this story. Not sure why, in retrospect.

Even though I'm one of those assholes you laugh at the fact people still are getting married, nowadays, it's always troubling for me to hear about folks who tied the knots when they clearly have no business being in a relationship. Julia and whathisface are definitely one of those couples that makes you go "divorced in three... two... one..." Sorry, but two years in a marriage is not at all the time to start experiencing into three ways - hell, if you're into the idea of marrying a chick OK with threesomes in the first place, you should goddamn sure she got that out of her system the second you're legally bound. Absolutely nothing good can seriously come out of it, and, as you can see, nothing good for whathisface didn't...

Seriously, as someone else commented here, how the fuck, as a man, can you walk off what has happened in both Jennifer's leaving room, but, especially, in her bedroom, and go back to the 'LOVING' couple you were before those events? Can anyone in a marriage come back from "Don't stop, Gary. Don't ever stop!"? Again, I don't see how that's possible! But whathisface's final words - "God, I love her." - certainly shows he is more than willing to give it a fighting chance...

What a pathetic cuckold. Hope your wife leave you soon, wimp!

It's not a good story, and it's even written way. Plus, some info the author left us here are simply puzzled (why should I care whether or not whathsiface gave us Gary and Susan's real name? Does that mean Julia and Jennifer's names were real? Hell, we don't even know HIS name!!!)

Again, not for me. Probably because I'm an idiot, I'm going to check BigGuy33's follow-up on this literacy PoS. Just by checking its score, I know I'm in for another awful ride...

Only one word to describe this , Pathetic!

Jeez, what a bunch of moronic commenters- complaining about the wife not being faithful, how he’s a cuck, how this is no way to run a marriage. Do they know what this Literotica category is? Seems like they need to understand how themes work, or maybe stay away from sites that talk about sex outside of marriage. His is one of the nicest short lead-ins I have read, and I can see why other writers would want to riff off of it. 5 stars, clearly. Too bad idiot trolls mess the public comments sections up so much.

There was NO upside for him with this sucker bet. If she didn't come he just got to take her home which he already will anyway. A classic, dumb cuckold.

On the other hand Gary had no downside. He got to maul a married woman win or lose. He already had two women in his harem now probably three.

As a story, it's neither good or bad. The author has some skills. He knew how to use atavism in a sentence. 3 stars.

they are done. Adios bitch

Play stupid games, win stupid prizes.

Leave, go home, get a lawyer on Monday, divorce her.

All of them.

No real people here, just selfish, self indulgent garbage.

Gary (the asshole) says "Sorry, man, but I don't like guys watching me do my thing. Susan and Jennifer, that's cool, but not you."

As he pulled his coat aside at the waist, exposing his 9mm pistol, Hubby says "I don't give a rats ass what you like or don't like, asshole. Julia is MY wife and I WILL watch. If you don't like it, tough shit."

"I allowed you eat her in front of me, and if you want to fuck her, I'm watching. There is no discussion on this."

(Horseshit story - 1* because that's the lowest rating I can give.)

"It was like being punched in the stomach a hundred times. God, I love her."

Why?

Cuck bullshit!!!!!!

Got! I hate cuck stories, what a fucking waste of my time.

Real garbage story scores 1/5

Gary (the asshole) says "Sorry, man, but I don't like guys watching me do my thing. Susan and Jennifer, that's cool, but not you."

"As he pulled his coat aside at the waist, exposing his 9mm pistol, Hubby says "I don't give a rats ass what you like or don't like, asshole. Julia is MY wife and I WILL watch. If you don't like it, tough shit."

"I allowed you eat her in front of me, and if you want to fuck her, I'm watching. There is no discussion on this." NOW THIS is a comment !!!!!!!!!!

The hapless cuck finally snaps and shoots everyone in the room before starting his new life on the road!!!

Last sentence dropped this to a one.

0 stars - stupid cuck/wimp crap. I marked the 1 star above to lower your average.

He should have gone home packed his stuff and moved thousands of miles away - never contacting her again.

BigGuy33 took up the challenge of writing a chapter 2 to this story. It's worth the read.

BTW - I agree with sbrooks103x, above re the last sentence. But dropped it from a 4 or five to a 3.

I hate the story. Why did he agree? Now he can't leave her because she've done nothing wrong.

And what's with the ending sentence? Why did he stay?

Why did he agree not to go upstairs? Then, at least he will participate.

Stupid story.

Not a cuckold story fan so zero stars for this. Only good thing about it is it was short read.

Well written ! The couple were obviously into kinky sex given their 3-some with another woman. What’s good for the goose is good for the gander. The only problem was the 2nd encounter wasn’t a 3-some. He only got to watch the seduction. The main event was one on one. That felt wrong, but not my story. Keep it in perspective. It’s fiction. No one actually got fucked or their feelings hurt. 5-😊😊😊😊😊 writing. Thanks

Just another cuckold story

Can you say CUCKHOLD?

Nicely written crap.

What kind of wimp would sit there?

Get up and leave the slut there. That is what she would deserve.

if Gary was likeable and the husband was more on-board and allowed to watch this would have been a hot little old-school bit of erotica. Still good but it makes me want a btb type of ending

Read again. Could’ve been a good story

Piece of crap… wasted your time writing only this!!

The author may write quite good stories but this time he forgot the old adage…. If you are going to write and post it then FINISH THE DAMN STORY!!!

Not for me! I dislike it.