by Kat0511
There should be a split in this category, and this story perfectly illustrates why. Superb story!
to discover a well written, interesting and real-seeming story. Great job!
The teasing, the flirting, the sexy banter . . . made this well written story very erotic. Nicely done!
...told in an appealing way. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for writing it. 4*
Easy to understand and identify with the two of them. Plenty of background on them in brief intersperced phases and sentences. Realistic by play and flirting. This is a complete short story so thank you for not damaging it with a sequel . . .
The next day the cramps start.
Orpheum69