All Comments on 'The Game'

Good, gritty story. The sex was a little clinical for my taste; the whore fantasy appeals to me more than the depressing and often frightening life of an actual prostitute, which you've captured so well here. But that's a personal preference, and it doesn't detract from an excellent piece of writing. Congratulations.

i dont give 5 very often....this well deserves it,,,very good!