All Comments on 'The Gang Gets Gang Banged'

This is actually pretty good, once u get past the begining :)

This is probably one of the better written stories I've read on literotica. I loved the fantasy of the situation, the fleshed-out way the characters are presented, and especially the ending. There's something really awesome about a hot story where you also want to know where the plot is going.

I hope you write many more.

I enjoyed some of it, but all In all too long, too many characters

Impressive for a first submission!

One thought--you might add more in the way of physical descriptions. Not just the girls but the landscapes too. British gang or chav cultures aren't particularly familiar to an American audience as they tend to differ from our typical inner city drug/thug culture.

I haven't finished it yet, but I am really impressed with the intelligence of the author. Very nice job. Possibly consider editing it down a little -- but really, quite sophisticated. Bravo!

Excellent first half story, give or take. Second half ... some less good