All Comments on 'The Gap in the Curtains Ch. 01'

You have definitely captured the spirit of voyeuristic erotica. Nuanced, well written, and well paced. Reading this brought me back to some of my own voyeurism escapades. Well done!

Just in case anybody is wondering, the other chapters to this story (there are four in all) have already been written are are just in the process of being edited. They will be posted over the next few weeks.

That's what I call a really promising start.

If I'm being nitpicking, you missed an open quotation in the last page. So take your time editing but I shall look foward to the remaining chapters. I shall even get my hairbrush ready!

10/10 Good Show but when will the next installment be ready? I just can't wait!

Glad you liked the story.

I submitted the second chapter on Thursday, it is currently pending approval. :)

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