All Comments on 'The Gap in the Curtains Ch. 04'

A promising start all the way through to a weird but satisfying ending.

Five-Star Salute!!

I've just finished the whole four chapters - wouldn't normally go for this kind of story but it kept me interested from the very start and the last chapter was a damn fine payoff. I really liked the moment where the narrative slipped into outright fantasy at the end - Liz's attitude seemed just a little too cool, and of course it was. Looking forward to reading more from you.

Please write more of this!

Love the way you write! You should think about writing a book! I loved it! Thank you!

I do not know whether you are a professional writer or not. If not, you should really thing of it as an auxillary vocation. With the proper plots and your style, you just might produce best sellers!

Voyeurism isn't my bag, but it didn't matter because the story was so well written. I especially liked the ending and the lesson you learned.

Very funny. I enjoyed Craig's thought processes and motivations.

I know it's been years and you probably are no longer writing but every story you wrote is amazing and well written, sexy and descriptive but not over the top and you made me feel for the characters while still being extremely turned on. Great job!

And the ending is fine. Might as well have a nice fantasy eh!!!

This should have been gay male.