All Comments on 'The Gardener'

Please continue with this story I think it has a lot of promise and I personally would love to read more.

I hate it when authors write a short blurb thats to short and call it a story. Then you ask if it should be continued. You want suggustions. OK Write it or dont. Post it,

but dont bother with this type of behavior.

Why start the story and leave everyone in suspense. You might as well complete the job and not serialize the stroy.

.....and I did enjoy it very much. The shortness of the tale just gets me wanting more! Thank you for sharing.

..............complaining about the 'shortness' of this piece, go back and READ THE PREFACE!!! We were told more would be following if the comments were there!

DUH!!!!

JJgreenville said it perfectly! Short intro, bit of set up, nice start. Please write more.

This is an outstanding start and has the making of being highly erotic. I get tired of reading other stories in this category that pit 25 year old guys with a "mature" woman of like 38. I'll confess, when I saw "elderly woman" in your tagline, I was expecting to open this story and read that she was 47. I like this premise A LOT, that Jamie will hopefully be fucking a woman easily old enough to be his great grandmother. And cheating on his nubile young girlfriend at the same time.

In the next chapter, I'd like you to help Jamie understand (so that we readers can then understand) what changed his mind about this woman from bordering on disgust to leaving with a "raging boner". Nothing incestous of course but just some explanation into his mindset that explains what turned him on so much about seeing all of her physical flaws.

Also, I'd like to know more about Agnes sex life, pre Jamie. Has she been sexually active since Gerald's death? Has she wanted sex? Or has she repressed her sexual desires and it will be 18 year old Jamie who will blatantly reawaken them?

You owe it to your readers to not wait "until you have time" to write the next chaper. You need to write it NOW and get these two sucking and fucking.

A great start and look forwards to the next instalment! Hope Agnes is wearing support stockings or even better tights on Jamie's return!

Let the seduction start by Jamie giving her a foot massage . Go into detail about her old dead skin feet and how that turns him on.

Most older women don't realize they can attract young guys. Those that do can have a lot of fun.

I have to applaud you for giving us a real woman, wrinkles and all. Too many of the mature stories feature the laughable, 'she was 70 but had the body of 30 year old.'

Great story with a real woman in it ....more please

Thanks for the support and the suggestions everybody! I'm starting to write the second installment now which I hope to make longer and more detailed than the first one!

Yes I do want more of this very erotic story.

My only advice... replace 36 B/C in "her breasts were an ample, but saggy 36 B/C" by an actual description. 36B/C doesn't talk much to my imagination :)

Thank you,

Mitch

More more more! lol

Your tale is a dandy and I'm looking forward to more of it. It is so refreshing to read of realistic people. However, I do hope Jamie and Agnes's ultimate intimacy does not descend into rough dominance; that would be a real disappointment. Thanks for a fun addition to the mature canon here on Lit. Kal

Still waiting for the second instalment! Lol please please publish it soon and make it lengthy

Looking forward to the next chapter!

If u can finish with a bang in chapter 2 and / or 3!!!!

Well written and unusual. I will read the next chapter certainly.

Please write the next chapter!

Ditto, and congratulations. Now I am looking for the next part. Yrs, Billydave.

This was one of the best examples of patience,....not only in story line, but in execution of details. I loved this. One of my favorite reads.