All Comments on 'The Gate of Ishtar'

Nice build up of an intoxicating setting. Definitely would like to read more.

You have a wonderful way with the written word. Thanks for sharing your gift in this arena. Now, write what happens next in Ishtar...

I really appreciate the kind feedback! Rest assured, I will continue the story of Ishtar. Stay posted! :)

I like the idea. I like the language. What I am missing in this intro (I assume that the story will continue) is their expectations and fears for this gathering. I would like less gate keepers and more info about the characters.

Hi Nargatoula! I've recently published the second instalment for this series, The Pool of Ishtar, which goes into greater depths with Isabelle's character, especially her fears and motivations. You'll also get a glimpse beneath the Gatekeepers' robes... I hope you enjoy!

(Note: I'm not sure if links are allowed in comments, but you may find the story via my author profile :)