All Comments on 'The Gear Ch. 05'

Hope to read the next chapter soon.

I kind of don't understand... So David Peterson wants his 3000 year old son to come back to life to be reborn in his youngest (Scott) son's body??? Wouldn't that mean he doesn't care about his youngest (Scott) son and wants to use Scott's body for his first son? Can you explain? Because that just sounds selfish

You expected a bad guy to not be selfish?

Waiting on the next chapter...

This shits all over the place. I makes zero sense at all. Even your sex scenes are bad. I read all five parts hoping, praying for some sort of redemption for this story.

I hate reading a story and find it not finished.

"clits"?

What the fuck is a 'clits'. Buy a fucking dictionary.

What happened???? The series is unfinished! :(

Please finish it.

Thanks