by PapaBear214
.... a rather abrupt ending.
I'd like to know what happened to them next !
I very seldom say anything negative in these Comments lists, but this story is just so badly written that I can't help myself. Wrong words, missing words, wrong tense of verbs, incomplete sentences, not to mention very naive story-line. (Thinking that if he comes in her she WILL get pregnant; and why on earth does an 18-y/o need a babysitter? If she has a dildo & vibrator, I really doubt she's a virgin. Is the Aunt really dumb enough to ask a 22-y/o guy to babysit an 18-y/o hottie?) I don't like to discourage anybody who tries hard, but you really tempt me. All I can say is, Try harder!