All Comments on 'The Geek Will Inherit the Earth'

I enjoyed the story very much. Really well done. A chapter 2 would be great.

Good work on This one, lost more apps to be made and lotss more Money to be made. Keep it up. Cheers.

Story was great, the title drew me in like a Geek to Mtn Dew. I too am a fan of I Fight Dragons https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Do61etbvpa4

But please follow this one up. I wanted this to go on and on. Thanks for the great work.

Best Rating I Can Come Up With.

Sex Club Encounter Well Constructed.

Worth the Time Taken to Read It.

... an interesting story if not for the "I can buy it with tons of money" part. Honestly, the money part ruined everything for me. It's like he couldn't get anything without that cheque.

Thanks for the feedback, all.

I'll look at a sequel, although it won't happen overnight.

I'll take all feedback into account before publishing an edit - my hope was that Tony's average looks and low self-esteem came through in the narrative, so the impact of the money really was everything to him, but I'm keen to look at that again.

Yes it's wish fulfillment. But I enjoy a good wish fulfillment story. And this was a good one. I do hope for a sequel. I think there is a lot of potential in the characters here..

The story was a bit too long in my opinion for the lack of character development. Events happened over the course of 2 days, so had a rushed feeling. I can understand the "Oh my God I'm rich" so he goes on to splurge, but having been a virgin and accepting Rebecca's statement of caring for him at that time, a bit much to believe. Drew being caught in a syndicate styled action with 1 day of being tracked? If only our own police force could be so lucky. Having Rebecca state that she doesn't like girls, then immediately admit to being Bi a moment later means she just lied to him. If you're going to do a sequel, work on your character development and pacing. Also, be consistent with a character's name. Is the character going to be called Becca, Bex when in familiar locations. My only other suggestion would be to allow the sex scenes to flow more organically.

Shouldn't that have been ""Drew was out late last night. ...."?

gave 5* but there is room for improvement, read it back before submitting, to get your mistakes. I really hope you write another chapter.

Good story but you could have had a couple more parts to it

This seems to be a repost from 2011, rather than a whole new chapter. Another chapter would be nice.