by jaycee13
this was good as far as it went but needs editing badly. make sure you finish it properly and soon but also be sure to proofread it several times and either have a friend read it or run it through one of the free editors here.
Redo this story it's badly in need of spell check, caps after commas and organization. Since when did Del become a nickname for Derrick?
Nice. Story of siblings.
Can’t wait for the next chapter and the dance competition.