All Comments on 'The Geeky Brother'

by jaycee13

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Excellent read!

I really liked this story. I hope you write more of them

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
GOOD BUT

this was good as far as it went but needs editing badly. make sure you finish it properly and soon but also be sure to proofread it several times and either have a friend read it or run it through one of the free editors here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
jb

gr8

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayalmost 12 years ago
Liked it but

Liked it but you stopped too soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
I Agree with Avery

Good but stopped to soon. Hope there is a sequel

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Constructive criticism

Redo this story it's badly in need of spell check, caps after commas and organization. Since when did Del become a nickname for Derrick?

prop69prop69about 5 years ago
Erotic and Exciting

Geeks can be sexy.

Can’t wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Nice! More please

bshell47bshell47about 2 years ago

Nice. Story of siblings.

Can’t wait for the next chapter and the dance competition.

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