All Comments on 'The Gem of Coeus'

It was a good story, but lacked a lot of substance. I would love to read a new version with the added meat to the story. Thanks.

By all means, please continue throwing your opinions and criticisms my way. They'll be taken into heart for the next story I make.

For Anon - My apologies for the lack of substance. However, this was my first story to keep me in a fairy-tale mood. Do not worry, I'll take your words to heart and will try to incorporate more substance into the next time I feel the fairy-tale mood.