by mermaid_girl
I am so excited to read another chapter but this was way too short. I hope you are able to write the next chapter soon.
Hey thanks soo much for an update! Hope more in the future, love Jake and daisy
I have been checking in regularly for this chapter, I agree that it's way too short but well done and I'm really looking forward to the next installment. Please don't leave it so long the next time.
and I'm sorry I read it. The writing and characters are good but it's just not moving along. Come on, a chapter on a dress?? I'd suggest for your next story finish writing it before you submit instead of agonizing over each chapter.
tom anon
I think it was really good! Just what you needed to get back in the writing groove. Don't let any comments get you down. You're a great writer and though everyone is greedy and would love to have more to read, I'm just happy you've picked up the story again.
Way to short!!!! Please try and do longer chapters because it is a great story!
I've been anxiously waiting a new chapter! Even though this was short it was great! Looking forward to the rest of the story! I hope this got the ideas flowing for you!!
I thought this was a good chapter. The scene with Matt was really good. It confirmed why Jake pushed Daisy away and it was a surprise to hear he'd been matt's best friend and pushed him away too. I like the dress shopping but I'd be pissed if my guy showed up and saw my dress b4 the wedding! MEN! :) hope for a longer chapter soon! and I hope eventually you will let a conversation happen between Jake and Daisy about his past. She needs to know why he did what he did. She needs to understand his pain too. She has to tell him how much he hurt her too but could tell him how much she loved him always too which would help him. It needs to happen before the wedding. Also, it is kinda silly thinking the parents don't know they don't own the ranch. He couldn't buy it from them without them knowing unless he paid it off and kept their names on the deed or something and gives it to them...I don't think he should give it to her for the wedding. It would mean as much if he gave it to her parents. (hint)
Omg Im so sad! This stories AMAZING but I think you need to finish it pronto :) and maybe alittle more drama?
for Daisy to ask more questions about why he treated her that way and why he pushed her away. He's blackmailing her and he hurts her physically and emotionally when he isn't in control... but it's all okay because he loves her? It seems borderline abusive to me.
You have shown us, as readers, the reasons behind Jake's terrible behavior but you haven't shown Daisy and Jake hasn't made any attempts to change.
I'm hoping that you will address this and that he might actually become a Gentle Cowboy.
ei, finish the story. hehehhe... yeah... i am demanding. :)
When is chapter 7 coming.. ive been waiting forever!
Please put up chapter 7! I love this story so much please don't leave us hanging too much longer!
more!!! This is why I don't read a series till it's done. Because you get me hooked and I waste all my time checking for updates. Not cool. But waiting with bated breath...
It was a twist, but I loved it. Eagerly awaiting the next installment
Please continue this series! One of my favorites on the entire site. You're breaking my heart by making me wait so long.
I have been following this story i like it very much it is a favorite of mine. Can't wait until the next chapter.....
I have been waiting months for the next one to come out.. how much longer do we have to wait!
wow, great story so far, loving how Daisy is slowly changing Jake into a more loveable character
can't wait to read the next chapter, and see if Daisy gets the wedding (and man) of her dreams afterall!
And of course that long awaited 'first time'
Keep up the good work!
When is the end going to come.. you can't just leave us hanging! ! Keep Writing :)
Been faithfully checking for updates on this story hoping u will post the next chapter!
PLEEEEASE FINISH THIS STORY! Your writing is fantastic, and I'll be so sad if I don't get to see what becomes of these two!