by Mesmaster
It looks like you have the bit about entering his office written out twice.
Also, any chance of a conclusion to Davenshaw?
Another great start to a new story. Similar to the Ms.Davenshaw series you were writing. I really hope you continue to write and flesh both of those stories out as they are very well written. I look forward to more of your works in the future, and can't wait to see how both of them are going to end.