All Comments on 'The Getaway (A D/d Romance)'

by Carnal_Flower

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
AND ANOTHER EXCELLENT STORY IN READ

Enjoyed this very much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
WOW

normally cant dig the d/d but this was amazing didnt even know a story could be this good amazing job written beautifully some very minor errors but even published books have worse so very good job A+ ;D

rodavrodavover 7 years ago

It would be also nice if they found out that the high profiled lawyer Mother is also having incest relationship with one of their sons.

RelentlessOnanismRelentlessOnanismover 7 years ago
Brilliant

I really love your stuff, it's so sexy and really well written. Some of the great incest/taboo writers have departed this site in the last few years, so it's wonderful that a new writer is offering such excellent work. I notice you tend to write daddy/daughter stories - might you consider mother/son?

mountaincat4mountaincat4over 7 years ago
About as good as it gets

Writing of this caliber is rare in any category but you elevated the I/T genre with this one. Mainly because it's about two people who love each other and just happen to be related. Excellent dialogue. Interesting characters. A few nuggets of pure gold scattered throughout, especially John's remark about not being responsible for his wife's happiness. While this is true, I'm not sure he really believed it. Another was his lack of feeling that he had cheated on her but would have felt that he was cheating on his daughter had he called one of his girlfriends for a quick romp. Nice job. 5*

MySweetestBabyMySweetestBabyover 7 years ago
Loved it

You always write amazing stories. None of these quick, corny, cheap reads. Yours are full of thought and HOT. Please post more D/d Romances soon!!! <3

GianettaGianettaover 7 years ago
A Perfect Prequel

I've often wondered if you would explore the history of "A Perfect Day" and I'm so satisfied that you did. Amazingly good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Thank you, thank you!

I'm so happy you have a new story up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wonderful!

Carnal, you have such a great way of combining love and romance with raw, dirty sex lol. Please keep writing!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Beautiful

You are such a beautiful writer! Your writing is amazing, absolutely the best! So romantic and so sexual! It doesn't get any better than this! Please continue writing!

aAmour1964aAmour1964over 7 years ago
Again

Another masterpiece! Astonishing and passionate...

Thank you again and again...

xqzxxxxqzxxxabout 7 years ago
Great!

Wonderful story - so nicely written. It is powerfully erotic in all the best senses of the word. The only tiny negative I have is that it is described as a "D/d" story - and I missed that part of it. Change the description and this is perfect though. Delightful father and daughter enjoying their taboo together. Nothing better.

Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Incredible! I'm in awe at how amazingly good this story was! I love the way it was told and how their story unfolded. So much depth and feeling in a short story. Carnal flower you are a very talented writer!

BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakalmost 7 years ago
I'm confused

Page 3 when they take the boat out the 2nd paragraph of that sections starts out: It was the July Fourth weekend. So if it's their 1st anniversary, how can it be:

"Oh, we will. Do you know what today is, by the way?"

"Should I?"

"It's Labor Day. Fall is coming." ???

Other than that I loved the story. I'm hoping that even though it's been 9 months, there will be another episode?

illwindillwindover 6 years ago
Well done. Truly well done.

Excellent work, Carnal_Flower. The way you combine romance and raw sex is absolutely incredible.

It's rare for me to find stories where the need and desire of both partners is expressed so perfectly. Those little moments alone for each character(he in his office, she in the pool and at the gallery) where the reader learns that both of these characters are just as desperate as the other to be together. They were erotic and romantic in equal measures.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
it was ok!

It was ok, I didn't like the cheating. I felt sorry for the wife!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

This is exactly what true love is like.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Love this

Passionate and amazing as always... so beautiful!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So yummy…full of passion and dirtiness. I love how their relationship naturally developed. I’ve read this many times and it’s always a favorite

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