by Carnal_Flower
normally cant dig the d/d but this was amazing didnt even know a story could be this good amazing job written beautifully some very minor errors but even published books have worse so very good job A+ ;D
It would be also nice if they found out that the high profiled lawyer Mother is also having incest relationship with one of their sons.
I really love your stuff, it's so sexy and really well written. Some of the great incest/taboo writers have departed this site in the last few years, so it's wonderful that a new writer is offering such excellent work. I notice you tend to write daddy/daughter stories - might you consider mother/son?
Writing of this caliber is rare in any category but you elevated the I/T genre with this one. Mainly because it's about two people who love each other and just happen to be related. Excellent dialogue. Interesting characters. A few nuggets of pure gold scattered throughout, especially John's remark about not being responsible for his wife's happiness. While this is true, I'm not sure he really believed it. Another was his lack of feeling that he had cheated on her but would have felt that he was cheating on his daughter had he called one of his girlfriends for a quick romp. Nice job. 5*
You always write amazing stories. None of these quick, corny, cheap reads. Yours are full of thought and HOT. Please post more D/d Romances soon!!! <3
I've often wondered if you would explore the history of "A Perfect Day" and I'm so satisfied that you did. Amazingly good.
Carnal, you have such a great way of combining love and romance with raw, dirty sex lol. Please keep writing!!!
You are such a beautiful writer! Your writing is amazing, absolutely the best! So romantic and so sexual! It doesn't get any better than this! Please continue writing!
Another masterpiece! Astonishing and passionate...
Thank you again and again...
Wonderful story - so nicely written. It is powerfully erotic in all the best senses of the word. The only tiny negative I have is that it is described as a "D/d" story - and I missed that part of it. Change the description and this is perfect though. Delightful father and daughter enjoying their taboo together. Nothing better.
Keep up the good work!
Incredible! I'm in awe at how amazingly good this story was! I love the way it was told and how their story unfolded. So much depth and feeling in a short story. Carnal flower you are a very talented writer!
Page 3 when they take the boat out the 2nd paragraph of that sections starts out: It was the July Fourth weekend. So if it's their 1st anniversary, how can it be:
"Oh, we will. Do you know what today is, by the way?"
"Should I?"
"It's Labor Day. Fall is coming." ???
Other than that I loved the story. I'm hoping that even though it's been 9 months, there will be another episode?
Excellent work, Carnal_Flower. The way you combine romance and raw sex is absolutely incredible.
It's rare for me to find stories where the need and desire of both partners is expressed so perfectly. Those little moments alone for each character(he in his office, she in the pool and at the gallery) where the reader learns that both of these characters are just as desperate as the other to be together. They were erotic and romantic in equal measures.
It was ok, I didn't like the cheating. I felt sorry for the wife!
So yummy…full of passion and dirtiness. I love how their relationship naturally developed. I’ve read this many times and it’s always a favorite