All Comments on 'The Gift'

Not very well-written, unimaginitive, just -- meh.

Some good ideas, but you rush things too much. You describe the sex mechanically. There is little to no genuine dialogue. And there is nothing to get the reader hot.

Try again.

Liked the idea....needed some more build up and description!

You took time to be descriptive about everything but the sex....to coin an old phrase...All preparation and NO h'in.... Try again..

obviously a popular theme since this is the gift # 129.

but, you left us wondering who these people are. nor did you provide us with any reason to care about them.