All Comments on 'The Gift'

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AsgardAsgardover 19 years ago
What a beginning!

What a hot, hot story, this must be the beginning of a series I presume? Please let it be!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Hot

Love older women and young men stories. Waiting for the next installment

wem3124wem3124over 19 years ago
Excellent Writing

Excellent story! Excellent writing! I'll look for more of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
GOT ME

OK, you hooked me! Now where is chapter 2?

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Wow! I want some.

I want some of that "tea" for my boy friend. Great story with lots of possibilities

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Like to talk to both men and women about erotic writing. I am always looking for people to help me edit my work and welcome input about spelling, punctuation, syntax and the general readability of my stories. Right now, (June 2013) I am doing research for the stories I write ...

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