by GSpotMan
Arousing erotica that morphed into every man's dream. Who would not want to be Mitch? Nicely plotted, well done on all levels.
Where are the rest of the chapters? I was hoping this time when I read it that the story would be finished but instead parts of it are missing. Please bring the rest of story out and finish it.
I have seen this before. However, there were several chapters. Where did it go?
More this was such an interesting story and I genuinely want more so please (puppy dog eyes )
truly enjoyed it, would like to see the storyline completed!!
Thank you
You really should consider turning this into a series of erotic ficition. I'm a fiction reader and this storyline holds a certain feel to it that mixes mystery , myth , fantasy , magic , and sex into a beautiful masterpiece. Please for the love of all things that are beautiful continue your writings about Mitch and " The Sisterhood "
I liked you story and would like to see more of this series. Thanks for putting this forward.
great writing and keep writing your stories your way.
They was absolutely nothing I don't like about this story. For me it was kind of like the Matrix. You start out confused but excited. As the story goes on you get all the surprises. I just wish it were me.
It was amazing. Only thing was the pregancy references (not the late ones, the ones like baby tube) made me feel a bit off...
I enjoy reading new postings on Literotica, but I very seldom vote. After reading "The Gift" not only did I give it a 5, but I felt compelled to write to you and let you know just how much I enjoyed this story. It is probably the most original work of art I have read on Literotica. Extremely well done! Keep up the great work!
To the author:
I would love to see this launched into an adult book collection. The story is just so creative and so full of potential, I really think that you would have a very good shot at getting this out on the adult book market.
Unusually creative. As I began reading the story, I was certain I could predict its ending. What a pleasant suprise. A great piece of literotica. The story was arousing and intriguing! Well done
There has to be a certain something about a story to keep me reading after the first page.As I said earlier well done ... UnicornUK
Wow am I envious of mitch.... That was a great bit of story telling and hotter than paprika nice one