All Comments on 'The Gift Ch. 03'

I could read this tale all night! Please keep this one going!

Please, keep the story goimg. Your writing is so Hot!

This was decent. I liked being in her head, sounds more like personal experiance then creative writting..hmmmm? So I hope we find out what happens when he finds teh camera, then we'll know it's fantasy ::chuckle:: as much fun as it sounds I really am NOT ready to use cameras, I am afraid I will see how I really look and will scare myself and my pet off sex for ever!! "I thought I looked sexy when I was cumming, but I look like a Polar bear with a bad cold!!"

Keep it up

This little trilogy is vivid and wonderful---I could feel every scene! Great work!

Minxy, I can only hope that you continue to wow us with this couple! The way you end each chapter leaves your readers wanting more, more, more! :)

on someone else's story today, I went back to read some of your work, and am I ever glad that I did! I don't know why you stopped writing, but it has certainly been a loss for all of us "regular readers". I duck a lot of the BDSM stories, but this one gives me pause to become a little more perceptive(?) about how it is offered. Thanks. I hope your marriage is still being engaged in as happily as it seemed to be when you were writing five to eight years ago.

DO

You have such a nice touch with details, offering only what is needed, nothing extraneous. The narrow time frame of each episode holds up well.

This one, with the tease of the cameras and forethought about the rest of the weekend at the end is a pleasant exception. Makes me wish for the pleasure of additional reading.