All Comments on 'The Gift: Day 04'

As a long time reader of "Lit" i have found only few writers i like, I took a sabatical for a month or two and when i came back "Wham" i was hit with The Gift.

What you have done with this story has me glued to my screen (and not by normal means either)

the story has everything i would expect to find in a store bought novel. Yes i will admit to a few mistakes here and there but the story line has me hooked.....line and sinker.

Great work and true effort shows in this story

Thankyou for sharing it with us on "Lit"

This is getting to be one scary story.

Looking forward to seeing how this ends.

Good stuff.