All Comments on 'The Gift She Gives Ch. 08'

What a mean cliffhanger to leave over the weekend! Sorry guys!

Love love LOVE this story. I didn't think you could make me like Vesper more than Domino, but you have. And as for Arc... I can't get enough of him!!

My readers really set me up with a challenge to create a woman that really was her own person and 'good enough' for a story with our Mr. Hughes. She falters now and again, but so do we all. I am glad you enjoy her, and my stories!

I'm sorry, but your story has become blasphemous. I don't think I can continue.

I'm sorry to lose a reader, but not every story is everyone's cup of tea. Mr. Hughes has never been portrayed as an angel from the actual bible, nor am I really holding to anything biblical at all, and haven't, in any of the stories I've written here on lit, all of which have included him.

I hope you find stories that suit your taste more! Thank you for your comment!

I'm eating this up, loving it!

Kindascake, you are, in fact, kind as cake. So glad you enjoy!

When will be the next chapter be release?

I have enjoyed all of your stories so far, keep it up.

Thank you thank you! Next chapter should be approved for Tuesday.

Don't know how you did it, but I love Vesper as much as Mr. Hughes. She needs to get with the 21st century though and realize that relationships require compromise. So far it's all about her.

Very much looking forward to the next chapter!

Oh, you know me....this is going to be a twisty bumpy road with some potholes in it. 😁

I feel so sorry for this guy, I hope she helps him grow a dick soon, I mean no wonder he's so pissed off and depressed, first you kill a whole lot of people against your will, get kicked out of heaven for busting under the pressure, now running a sex spa without any junk but you still get horny and the chick you love is some super hot freaky moth thing thats made for you but you can't even touch her while other dudes keep feeling her up while you watch. I would have cut my wings off too just so I could jump from the nearest building... Please give him a break you are making my balls ache in sympathy.

Now if you've read my stories, you know they are not straight forward. But I promise, this is HIS story, and things will go his way...eventually...we shall see. I love him, and I hate to see him stressed....but the story sort of writes itself sometimes.... patience, patience....

I mean it wouldn't get me all in a twist if that was what happened, but it'd also be a very interesting dynamic if that didn't happen (Either good old fashioned toys or Mr. Hugh's nifty ability to control others, but of course that would take some serious adjustments on both side's mentalities)

Regardless, I'll be awaiting for Tuesday with baited breath.

I totally agree with you, it is not actually necessary to have a cock in order to have a very fulfilling and sensual romantic life. I know plenty of people who still add some "manmade" fun to their sessions in the bedroom. They do say variety is the spice of life!

Did Mr. Hughes just come to lunch with Vesper...with Domino's fluid on him? I remember in your other story "A Few Sips", there's one chapter he tied her up and you made brief references to him finding a woman (Vesper) at the spa a nuisance. I hope he didn't kiss and finger Domino while he was with Vesper too.

P.S. I love your writing!!!!! ♡

Hello! Nope! It's not Domino! She's in Wisconsin at this point of the story! Doesn't mean we won't see her, but she's not there yet!

What I truly want you to write, is what your head and heart dictate. You, and only you, are the teller of this tale. Most authors have never released a book a chapter at a time and invited fan input. They tell their tale in its entirety, as they hear it in their head, then release it.

Please, be true to yourself, trust me, your true fans will be with you for the entire ride.

I know that the last time there were any comments was over four years ago, but a thought came to me that I truly wanted to know. Not once is it mentioned how Mr. Hughes gets any sexual satisfaction. It is never mentioned in any of the stories that you tell.