All Comments on 'The Gift She Gives Ch. 16'

So hot. I love the antici...pation.

Yes, yes, all the yes.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Make the next chapter be soon!

Nthusiastic

Yippee skipeeeee!!! (Yeah, I said it. I may be 35+, but sometimes...) Anyway, I'm sure we know EXACTALY what 'gift she gives' to Arc....LMFAO! That's it... No more coffee for me!

Awesome story telling again, Chris. I was a bit worried when she went up; I feared that she'd try to beat the snot out of someone...and I wouldn't blame her.

Great work, my dear.

Sxualchocol8

Fovewolves: I love the anticipation, too....so you can imagine how stressed I was that two chapters posted in one day!!! Lol

Kindascake: I take it you're excited. 😆

Holy: well, you don't have to wait much longer it posts tomorrow. I hope you all like it, I think I edited it at LEAST 15 times!!

Please: tomorrow!

Sxualchocol8: us upper 30s crowd have every right to say yippee skippee! I'm glad you like. The gift she gives....is the gift of healing, so yes, she has already done so much for our dear angel....and certainly shall continue to heal him in other ways. 😉

Seriously hoping you keep His kink though and her find pleasure in it. Erasing the "so wrong" you've made through Anna and Domino...wolves etc. PDA in the woods...not telling you what to write...just would ~seriously~ like them to find max pleasure experienced through your writings for everyone else. Correcting a wrong that should be right.

OMG even better than the last chapter. Can we have more please?

There may be a few more near the end of the week, but I just had a bunch of ick dumped in my lap that is keeping me from editing right now! ack!

I did think that touching Arc would cause his wings to grow back - though I thought they'd be pure white (although he is fallen). Didn't expect a penis, though - but that is a welcome gift. I was surprised by the people she met in Heaven - seems to have gone "full circle" to have her Mom hug her - and I can just visualize the angels' faces when they saw her. Wonderful buildup, wonderful excitement - glad to see a dragon make a reappearance. Now to have Arc resolve his issues with Anya - seems like she's come across as "the heavy" in all this - I don't think it's fair because she was just discovering herself. To me, Arc has only himself to blame for the sundering of that relationship.

That chapter was just goddamn amazing. I now have only one more instalment before I catch up with everyone :(

Thank you SAC12, this series is brilliant.

Can not wait for your next story in this saga. You have so many wonderful characters that make us question their story and wonder on their future. Thank you.

'My wings weren't the only things that grew when you touched me, Vesper.'

That explains a few things...

I was quite sure that would happen very early in the story. Would've been disappointed otherwise!