All Comments on 'The Gift She Gives Ch. 17'

Ugh I'm so in love with these characters

So hit and miss whether the site will let you read a new chapter or not, but I lucked out today and couldn't be happier about it! I am SO hoping for babies for Vesper!

Oh my!

How hot is this chapter!

The amount of proactive intercourse they're doing! I hope their room is sound proof coz the two that's staying with them is probably listening to the whole ordeal! Haha

Love is so sweet: This was such a fun exciting chapter to write. I am glad that you enjoyed it! :D I can't wait to see where the head next!

Hit and miss: I hope for babies for Vesper, too...she's waited long enough! And I have this trick I do when the site isn't letting me see the newest chapter, even though it has been approved. I go to the previous chapter, scroll through the url and change the "16" or whatever to "17" or whatever. As long as the chapter has been approved (and I have been posting when they should show up), then that should work from about 2 am eastern standard time on....

(There is not a new chapter for tomorrow, sorry!!!!)

In love with these characters: I know the feeling and I am really glad to know that you have connected with them!

Please another chapter where he tells her he's never going to be with anyone else maybe a wedding scene and her pregnant omg please 😍

I really enjoyed the story so far, but I hope this isn't the end as is the Lucifer plan has not yet carried out

Omg: there is more to come. We shall see how things progress.

More: you are right, Lucifer's "plot" hasn't played out....yet.

I love Mr. Hughes! I hope this story continues and from his perspective. He is my all-time favorite character of yours!

Hello! Don't fret! Their story is not quite at an end yet. I'll be back with several new chapters in a few days. I ❤️ Mr. Hughes, too! And to think when I first wrote about him, he was just gonna be the driver!!!

After I finished reading it, I thought, "Oh no, it's all over ... or soon will be" so it's good to know it isn't ending just yet. I do hope Vesper has a baby - wonder what baby's wings will look like :-)

As for mixed feelings, I didn't enjoy this chapter as much as the previous one - not just because of the "big climax", but it seemed like Arc revealed himself more than he's ever done before. I think it's wrong for Arc to ask Vesper to never take another lover without committing himself to the same restriction. Fidelity works both ways. Still, I imagine Arc will find a way to surprise me yet further - and am looking forward to it.

This was as good as I hoped. Love them and loved this chapter.

I want to see Vesper and Domino interact to see if she approves. I want Vesper to talk to Anya and have her apologize to Mr. Hughes. I also am excited for them to practice making, make, and then have their baby.

A little anxious waiting for the other shoe to drop, though. Hope nothing major goes wrong before the end.

Please, please, please! Don't end their story without them having a baby so I can see what it looks like! I'm begging Please! :D

I am so impatient. I check every morning for a new story. I'm definitey addicted. Love it!

Hi! Sorry I've been absent....but life. Ugh I am finishing up with this totally dreadful class. I will post here when the next chapters are submitted. Please be patient with me! :D

I was getting worried.

Return here daily just to see if there's a new submission.....I'm hooked!

Will there be another chapter?

I have all sorts of good and bad excuses, some of which involve a horrifically boring paper I had to write for a college course, and giving myself somewhat of a concussion (don't ask, it's completely dimwitted of me). I have several more chapters to go before this story finishes, and I really really want to get it all done and submitted within the next week. I am on break from school for a week, so I am hopeful I can keep my schedule. Chapter 18 HAS BEEN SUBMITTED, so let's hope it gets approved for tomorrow! Chapter 19 should be edited and submitted either later today or tomorrow. Sorry for the delay. I don't want to give you guys crap chapters, so I am trying not to rush! <3 Sin

It doesn't look like it's going to get approved for tomorrow, so let's hope for Thursday! I know you are all anxious!!!

Their first time is really beautiful. He has changed quite a bit.

BTW, you seem to have a regular spelling error: to even when it should be too.