by HalfAsleep
What a delightfully arousing chapter for beginning a story. I love the delicious rollercoaster ride of emotions of the reluctant-but-eager exhibitionist coupled tightly with the wonderful senses of the sexual submissive!
You've written other hot, emotionally-charged stories so I'm hoping that this is another one. It's a great start, let's all hope... You describe the emotional senses with amazing insight, and coupled with the sex scenes, the narrative moves along nicely.
My name is Pat also, and thus I'll just continue reading the story as if it was me as the main character! Hey, it's permitted!!
I'm eagerly awaiting "my" next hot, sexy, arousing, emotionally-charged adventure. Will it contain sucking lots of big, hard, delicious cocks? Please? Pretty please? ;=)
Pat