All Comments on 'The Girl and the Party'

Something I secretly fantasize about. Very well written, with moments of affection that set it off just right. Great story!

Enjoyable, except for the almost total absence of the boyfriend during. It's her pov so blindfolded she wouldn't know if he was watching over her at all. Unfortunately, that means we don't know if he was watching over her at all. To me that means her didn't. All we know is that he walked away from her without a word, and later got a blow job near her. That's not the same as checking that she's okay. Yes, she has a safeword. People don't always use it when they should. A touch and a word here and there would have made this perfect.

Yeah, this was meant to be just a pure fantasy without much depth. In terms of the boyfriend, I actually don't think much of him. Not that he has any character development since this was meant to be something quick and simple, but I kind of modeled him off Rene in Story of O, the master who isn't really as in love with the sub as she is with him. If it helps, I imagine Darling eventually leaves him for Mistress Avalea.

I was thoroughly entertained. Great party.😉