All Comments on 'The Girl at the Pool'

Where the hell did you learn to spell?

Yeah, hot! Thank you!

But the earlier comment is ryt ==> right.

thys ==> thighs.

Try a spell checker or an editor, please. But keep writing!

The only thing stopping me from giving you a 5 is the spelling. Great work though!

Nice little erotic story, written by a writer that I assume is a horny teenager. The problem is that it is totally unbelievable.Only in fantasy do gorgeous beauties act like this. But I guess this is a fantasy site, so what the hell.

the Ct. Yankee