All Comments on 'The Girl Ch. 5'

I hope John has a darn good lawyer on tap and takes this company for a bundle, as well as getting her abusers jailed.

Read the whole story up to date and blood is pumping. Dude, you know how to write! IMO, forget the lawyers. The SOBs should be raped by their own creations, and not the ladies. That would treat them right. Rexfelis, I have to give you a big congrats. You know how to bypass the brain and go straight for the gut. Keep up the work.

I have read some of your other work and essays and I agree with your mother you should be published and paid....

I could not stop reading until I finished all the chapters. This is a wonderful storyline, I hope you write more.

I gotta know the ending please finish it. I hope it has a happy ending.

Would love to see how this one ends! You must finish it.

Could it be that Desiree is more human than suspected - could she become pregnant?

I agree 100% with all comments.

Please let me know at karlrudya@yahoocom when chapter is advailable.

Thank You, Karl