All Comments on 'The Girl in the Black Bikini'

What a delicious story. You could end with just this. But it really deserves a part 2. I hope you will continue their adventures together.

I'm so flattered. I've never had a story written about me before (and I have to say that this was with my permission and the author ran it by me before submitting it). Love it and thankyou :) ...... Chloe

Of Chloe the sweet, the pure, the virginal. I'm sure she wouldn't do anything like this.

Lue

Ps: White porcelain skin? I thought Chloe was ABC. If she had looked like white porcelain she would have taken you home for the Japanese Tea Ceremony, not the activity you describe here.

Aahhh, but lue, in a story, ANYTHING is possible, limited only by the imagination of the author. I don't mind being porcelain for a day :)

Very good story line. It grabs you with a tease and sucks you right in. Good choice with the D750, I shoot professionally with a D610 myself.