All Comments on 'The Girl in the Blue Jean Shorts'

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WatcherRobWatcherRobover 9 years ago
Love story

Nice written. Totally believable. But no condom?

dirtyomandirtyomanover 9 years ago
Love story??

well written love story. Only this one has an ending. This is a seduction, not very erotic one at that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
well done

love how every thing came together tenbears43

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
thank you

darling i love your story, just love it. Please write another one where the woman is older say 55 and the man younger. hugs. Debbie

SoleBrotherJeffSoleBrotherJeffover 5 years ago
Beautiful older/younger love story

I have always been a people voyeur. As I read this story as it moved from a fantasy observation to an actual sexual relationship it boggled my mind.

It was like a fantasy finally coming true!!

Please keep writing.

Thank you.

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